I think that "Worth, in basic terms, is simply the added up value of all that you have built, researched, trained, or owned." should be Worth, in basic terms, is simply the added up value of all that you have built, researched, trained, and own." changed or owned to and own, think about it.

"If you are attacked, you lose worth based on the units/building and structures that you lost." I think it should be "If you are attacked, you lose worth based on the units, buildings, and structures that you lost." units/building says units is plural but building isn't, which is improper, it can just simply be a list.

"Exploring, its a good thing!" Comma splice, and error in contraction, should be "Exploring; it's a good thing!"

Didn't really like the sentence, "On the left side of the page, with links such as News, Chat, Forums, and Empire Search, is the Game Rankings tab." didn't find anything really wrong with it just might need rewording, it sounds funny

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