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Oct 28 2007, 3:31 PM EDT
There are a couple of grammatical errors on this page. In the last paragraph last sentence, "One tokens makes one tick pass,..." should be "One token makes one tick pass,...""The second is to buy a plus account. These cost $5, and only give u 15 tokens, but have several other perks, too." There should be no comma after $5, also there should be no comma after perks. "Tokens are absolutely the most valuable resource available in the game, when used right." Would make more sense if u switched the sentence around. "When used right, tokens are absolutely the most valuable resource available in the game." "There are to ways to go about getting tokens." to should be two 4 out of 8 found this valuable. Do you?
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SaucyJack |
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Feb 2 2008, 7:48 PM EST
Also make a note of the fact that by spending 50 tokens, one can buy their PLUS account.
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